A pictogram is a symbol that represents a word, object, activity, idea, or concept by illustration. We have introduced a method for composition education to present the idea of writing by the use of pictograms interconnected with arrows. Drawing a pictogram network can become a helping guide to the understanding of others' intention. We applied this method to the peer review method in foreign language composition classes and named it a pict-net abstraction. In this research, we revised our previous method to better represent knowledge and concepts. The revised procedure turned out more effective than the original one.